Could you review my site

01wojtowicz · 12-04-2005, 18:22

could you help me improve my site by messaging me or posting on my thread
ive now configured it for firefox

The site is
www.pieboy.bravehost.com

Departed · 12-04-2005, 18:44

I know this is your first site and you have no knowledge of html so...

That is very very good. Try and crop/resize the pictures on the left. Work on the rest of the links and try and get better hosting.

Bravehost is not the best. Try hostmatrix.org or payed hosting.

rustypaulin · 12-04-2005, 18:46

i think it looks really good it would be an idea to make the pictures at the side thinner so they dont overlap the text.

01wojtowicz · 12-04-2005, 18:48

Thanks for telling me about the pictures
ill try n fix it

clement · 13-04-2005, 00:25

Not bad for your first dude.
Yea i agree with the guys, the pictures need to be resized and also i notice you have all the goodies like "tell-a-friend", site-ring etc.
These are really not need, use that space for something more useful that will keep ppl coming back.

Ic3CoLd · 13-04-2005, 01:26

Pretty good site... Did you use something like a What you see is what you get(WYSIWYG) Editor? It looks like you did because those things are overlapping. Anyways, I would recomment getting a new host as well, as already suggested, try http://hostmatrix.org, great host. But, if you move to a different host, you most likely will have to learn HTML. Try http://lissaexplains.com. Very simple way to learn HTML, yes, a little cheesy, but hey, it's useful

01wojtowicz · 13-04-2005, 06:47

It may be hard to resize some pics as they have text on that is too small to read if it is resized

Thanks

01wojtowicz · 13-04-2005, 06:51

could anyone tell me a good FREE web hoster

benf · 13-04-2005, 09:15

Try and lay out the site a bit better. I would suggest to put more text on the page, position things on the page with thought. Some stuff looks like they have been dumped on the page. Actually think about where it is going and add more colour range. I like the games though, kept me having fun for a while.

good luck and keep working on it.

benf · 13-04-2005, 09:17

oh and one more thing, design a logo it will make it look ten times better.

12-04-2005, 18:22	#1 (permalink)
01wojtowicz me Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wiltshire Posts: 714 iTrader: 0 / 0%	Could you review my site could you help me improve my site by messaging me or posting on my thread ive now configured it for firefox The site is www.pieboy.bravehost.com Last edited by 01wojtowicz; 16-04-2005 at 21:59. Reason: ive got firefox now

12-04-2005, 18:44	#2 (permalink)
Departed Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 1,088 iTrader: 0 / 0%	I know this is your first site and you have no knowledge of html so... That is very very good. Try and crop/resize the pictures on the left. Work on the rest of the links and try and get better hosting. Bravehost is not the best. Try hostmatrix.org or payed hosting. __________________ -Gary

13-04-2005, 01:26	#6 (permalink)
Ic3CoLd WMT Addict Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 147 iTrader: 0 / 0%	Pretty good site... Did you use something like a What you see is what you get(WYSIWYG) Editor? It looks like you did because those things are overlapping. Anyways, I would recomment getting a new host as well, as already suggested, try http://hostmatrix.org, great host. But, if you move to a different host, you most likely will have to learn HTML. Try http://lissaexplains.com. Very simple way to learn HTML, yes, a little cheesy, but hey, it's useful __________________ Better than Firefox? Try Maxthon

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rustypaulin Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 350 iTrader: 0 / 0%	i think it looks really good it would be an idea to make the pictures at the side thinner so they dont overlap the text.

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01wojtowicz me Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wiltshire Posts: 714 iTrader: 0 / 0%	Thanks for telling me about the pictures ill try n fix it

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01wojtowicz me Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wiltshire Posts: 714 iTrader: 0 / 0%	It may be hard to resize some pics as they have text on that is too small to read if it is resized Thanks

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benf WMT Addict Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Aylesbury Posts: 143 iTrader: 0 / 0%	Try and lay out the site a bit better. I would suggest to put more text on the page, position things on the page with thought. Some stuff looks like they have been dumped on the page. Actually think about where it is going and add more colour range. I like the games though, kept me having fun for a while. good luck and keep working on it.

13-04-2005, 09:17	#10 (permalink)
benf WMT Addict Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Aylesbury Posts: 143 iTrader: 0 / 0%	oh and one more thing, design a logo it will make it look ten times better.

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